Today in the 21st century, one can see unfounded superstitious beliefs among some nations, particularly in poor ones like south African countries and under developed states. These beliefs are based on some accidental happeninigs which seemingly sound to be related to each other, but not in deep looking; moreover, afew number of them became global. For instance, one person kills a black cat and after a while, haphardly he himself passes away and likewise other incidents.Therefore, because of some of these accidental happenings you can observe that black cats are respected, no.13 is omitted from building storeys and airplane seats, owls are the symbol of bad luck and so on. We can deduce from above mentioned samples the fact that beliefs based on synchronousness of events and even unbased beliefs are deeprooted in people’s mind which can hardly be removed
T.Amini Golestani
+ نوشته شده در یکشنبه بیست و پنجم آذر 1386ساعت 20:46  توسط طاهر اميني
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Television is doing irrreparable harm on our minds and time. This statement outwardly seems somehow conroversial, but I can prove it; first of all, it cuts us off from the real world ( we get used to getting second hand experiences instead of getting them directly), secondly, whole generations grow up addicted to television so they soon become lazy and glue to armchairs (couch potatos), thirdly, parents and grand parents will be ignored in families in the result (as a result) of our full attentions which are directed toward television programs, finally, we can declare that our idle hours are idled away by t.v. programs); in the long run, we will notice the fact that we have sacrificed many valuable moments and that, television has become one part of our culture which can not be discarded away like hypodermic serum injection (a theory in communications) which rapidly mix to our blood and we can not separate them, so we now know that television has many disadvatages beside it's benefits.
T.amini
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The paragraph is very well unified and coherent.
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But, the second sentence is a statement of the obvious because when you write your topic sentence, you clearly want to prove something.
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The most important problem is that after each major support there should be a period, but you connected all the supports to each other. Even there is no full stop to the end of the paragraph.
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You should ommit the paranthetical information such as "coach potato", or "a theory of communication".
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Please correct your signature, too: T. Amini
+ نوشته شده در یکشنبه یازدهم آذر 1386ساعت 21:37  توسط طاهر اميني
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Third world countries, specially deprived ones like Afferican nations are known as developing or underdeveloped countries not developed ones. Why such an issue is common among underdeveloped countries can be answered by analysing several factores: firstly, they are suffering from interior problems like poverty, increasing tendency of their population, brain drain, unemployement and etc. Secondy, these countries face exterior problems such as being colonized, getting vast sums of exterior lones, being uniproducer, selling raw matterials in low prices and so on. The last problem not the least one is cultural deficiencies like superstitious beliefs (in India, for instance, from one hand there are lots of hungry people and from other hand they worship cows and eatable animals; consequently, they can not eat them), tendency to consuming not producing, illiteracy, not having hope for continuing their lives and etc. When we gather these problems together we will immediately notice that unless they are not solved, this process will continue and the 3rd world nations will remain in this situation.
T.amini
+ نوشته شده در یکشنبه یازدهم آذر 1386ساعت 20:39  توسط طاهر اميني
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"An Idle brain is the devil's workshop"
This proverb implies the point that the reasons of crime are originated from a mind not occupied with thoughts or usefull ideas. Suppose a young unemployed boy or girl whose job is hanging around and prowling on streets doing nothing except idling away their idle hours. Undoubtedly, when one is hired in an organization or other working place (s)he would never find time to think about devilish imaginations or perilous thoughts. We can make this conclusion that in order to not be trapped in Satan's trap it is better to keep our mind on thinking and working.
T.Amini Golestani (tag)
Comments: Dear Mr. Amini, please stop writing about proverbs. Instead, read my post on inductive reasoning and write according to the model. No proverbs again, please.
+ نوشته شده در دوشنبه بیست و هشتم آبان 1386ساعت 22:49  توسط طاهر اميني
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Likes Like Likes
Naturally, age, gender, educational degree, job and other factors are criteria on which individuals base their friendships on. Barely, for instance, you would see a young man sitting with an old one joking, playing games or going to cinema. Even among animals it is hardly seen two different kinds or species live with each other. In Islam this coordination is highlighted and it is recommended many times that couples are prefered to be from one level, class and social dignity in order to not (not to) encounter difficulties in their life and future. So we can say this wellknown proverb that: "birds of feather flock together".
T.Amini Golestani
Comments: Grammatically this paragraph is very good, but it is not based on inductive reasoning. Read my post again and try to check each sentence by means of the "because test".
+ نوشته شده در دوشنبه بیست و هشتم آبان 1386ساعت 10:50  توسط طاهر اميني
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"A littel leak will sink a great ship"
The above stated proverb is one of the most remarkable ones which addresses those people who do not care about problems which outwardly seem low-valued but in reality would change conditions to critical situations.One should never understimate little troubles, for even one seemingly negligble problem can eventually cause irreparrable devastation. We take it for granted that everybody knows one festering wound unless be paid ample attention can spread overally and kill the person in the long run, So never belittle little riddles .
“All are not Theives that Dogs Bark at”
Do not rely on your eyes; it means that sometimes one encounters a situation or faces a person seemingly suspicious , but at a second and deeper thought, you realize you have made a big mistake ; besides , being suspicious about everything and everyone is not recommended according to islamic maxims There is an Ayyah which states: “ان بعض الظن اثم” .Being polysuspicious is inflamatory and one of devil’s signs ; moreover, polysuspiciousness lowers your dignity and social values and eventually, will lead you to the middle of nowhere, so do not count on exterior matters
+ نوشته شده در دوشنبه بیست و یکم آبان 1386ساعت 20:43  توسط طاهر اميني
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